CagedRealm's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dark DnB Loop]

Good try

Heres my review. I take it you haven't had fl too long. When making music try to avoid using presets and loops the become Cliché and unintresting. Most people around here hate them and often vote zero if they hear them so there is a word of advice. I see you were going for a deep bass effect but it didn't work too well with the detune and sounds like a change in tempo. Try makeing the bassline in tune and adding a reveerb to it, then use a paramatic Eq to make a better sound. From what people have told me about DnB has about a 170 to 240 tempo try and keep it around there. Try and avoid doppy sounding basslines go for a saw like, square or funky they seem to work for me. There's myy input if you have msn I could give you more advice if you want mine is [e-mail]

OH-Y34H responds:

well, tnx for the review man. only this too is a very early work of mine lol. I had Fl 2 days when i made this. the tips r nice, as u will see ive used some of those well,'techniques'on my last song. i will add u to my msn then. cya and tnx again for the review! :D

[ACID ON PLATFORM GAMES]

Alright but still needs a bit of work.

This is my outtake on the song. The one arp in the beginning worked well for a build but after a short while it became repatative. Personally I would of switched off to something else. The wavy pad in the back was nice but try some effects on it to have a easier flow. The drums were alright good job with the snare.

FoxTechno responds:

thanks for review, to be frank, this is such an old song, i dont think i can change it anymore, it went when my memory crashed, its only on my cds and cassetes now.
thanks, AGAIN.
STARFOXTECHNO, DJ DRAGON ,.

[Zion-The Light at the End]

Great work

For your first song here you certainly have a great start here. Your drums kept a good motion with the rest of the song and all of your instruments were great nothing stood out more than it should. The automation was awsome better than what I do by far. I left my vote 5/5. Even though your the new guy here mind giving me some pointers your song puts most of mine to shame lol.

The-XI responds:

Sure man, I'll drop you a review! And I seriously doubt that I put you to shame... i'm pretty sure your a good artist :)

Thanks!

[TECHNO! RAGE 2!]

Well different

As I said different I thought the song should have had a bit more organized drums but I did like the phaser on the snare and the end pad you had going. I left my vote for this song already and I want to see what else you can do. check out my account if you think I am good enough I want to try and make a collab with you. Here is my e-mail [e-mail]

MuSic-Creater responds:

yea sure ill do that ill add u on msn so we could collab mabye after im done my techno rage 4 with tones new beats ya ill add u on msn ok cya laters

[dj pmg - last short synth]

Well the beginning was good

you had a fairly good pad going on their in the beggining I would consider this more of a pattern personally than a song. But it got kinda messed up in the middle. If you want to collab or want any advice here is my e-mail
[e-mail]

dj-play-my-game responds:

aight sure i added ur msn but u seem to be never online, maybe cuz i live at the other side of the world

[Gray Matter--_--]

Good one

I decided to give you my personal input on this song. I liked it but I would of liked a longer piano pattern but I do admit I like how bouncy it was. As usual you had good effects added in with pleasant drums. I already left me vote for this song 5/5. Hope to see more.

PERVOK responds:

Thanks for the review man, and i know, there should ahve bene a longer piano pattern, but I already had one that is 8 bars long, but it doesnt have big enough of an impact.

Thanks again!

[_-=[Burning My Angel]=-_]

Creative

I can tell you certianly know your stuff. After hearing this I am certain you have potentail to do great things with your music. Hope to hear more from you. Keep up the good work and I am sure your music will become something truely great.

MaestroSorrow responds:

many thanks for the kind words CagedRealm, though I do not plan to extend my skills into any profession, I will continue to produce music to entertain friends, both in real life and in NewGrounds.

[DJ[Z] - Myth's Theme]

Neat

This song is different, no saying that it's bad. I like hopw the notes are arranged so that it's cheerful so it won't become repetative. Btw I also reviewed your song Ocean Memories I like that too. Hope to hear more songs in the time to come.

zeeber85 responds:

thanks for the review! Yes, i did try to make it a little difference since he was goign to the CG, i thought i would try to combine both my usual trance, with a little bit of a march type theme to it. Either way he now has his own theme song :P